Photoshop contest!

[ararat]

argh, after the 4th try to upload that one: http://rapidshare.com/files/164768638/weeed.zip.html

 

[Caduceus Mercurius]

I've asked around, and practically everyone likes Misery's design the best. I don't think voting will be necessary, Misery wins the trip!!

Misery, there were some problems with the image files you sent me. The first page, second paragraph, last sentence:

kankerpatiInten should be kankerpatiënten.

A few lines above that:

jaren `60 should be jaren '60

I think the entire text of the first page could go a little bit down, for example 4 or 5 mm.

On page two the text is aligned to the left and right, on page one only to the left. I don't know which I like better.

Would it be possible to put the two lines containing the urls a fraction closer to eachother? The lower line could remain as it is, with the upper line a bit more down, so it's separated more from the text above it.

I found a new printer by the with better prices and quicker delivery. I have to send them the design by 6:00 am next morning (Wednesday), so we have a bit more time.

 

[restin]

Congratulations, I completely agree

 

[ararat]

I've asked around, and practically everyone likes Misery's design the best. I don't think voting will be necessary, Misery wins the trip!!

Misery, there were some problems with the image files you sent me. The first page, second paragraph, last sentence:

kankerpatiInten should be kankerpatiënten.

A few lines above that:

jaren `60 should be jaren '60

I think the entire text of the first page could go a little bit down, for example 4 or 5 mm.

On page two the text is aligned to the left and right, on page one only to the left. I don't know which I like better.

Would it be possible to put the two lines containing the urls a fraction closer to eachother? The lower line could remain as it is, with the upper line a bit more down, so it's separated more from the text above it.

I found a new printer by the with better prices and quicker delivery. I have to send them the design by 6:00 am next morning (Wednesday), so we have a bit more time.

\o/ hehe, thanks guys

the aligning.. it was somewhat by intention. the first page seemed better having it that way, because it doesn't look like it would be much to read that way, and if the reader is interested he still can read the second page, which has smaller fonts and from left to right alignment.
that was my idea, if you think it would be better to have it from left to right all the time, it is fine too, I just thought it might be better that way.

no problem with the lines.

does it have to be psd again? jpeg would be a bit more comfortable, although it wouldn't matter that much.

 

[Caduceus Mercurius]

I guess it doesn't have to be a PSD if the JPG is of the proper size.

I would personally prefer a similar size type on both sides of the brochure, with the sentences aligned to the left and right (if that works out, otherwise align both to the left).

If sending JPG's is much easier, perhaps you can send me a couple of versions?

 

[ararat]

of course it's possible.

a similar size :/ well I'll try. but that way I either will have a lot of text on the first page, or not enough space on the second.
the way it was before is just 0,5pt difference, I don't think that it is that noticable.
edit: ok, it works out, should be ok that way.

not it's not easier, it's just faster.

 

[ararat]

here's the new version: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=RYKONMZH

 

[Caduceus Mercurius]

I uploaded the final version of the leaflet and ordered 7500.

Congratulations misery! I hope you'll enjoy the trip!

Thanks everyone for your input and feedback!

I'm real zleepy now.

 

[restin]

Can you publish what this trip consists of?

 

[Caduceus Mercurius]

This is the end result. Thanks misery!

 

[Caduceus Mercurius]

Can you publish what this trip consists of?

Well, the tickets are made out of paper. :wink:
For the rest it'll be a surprise. 8)

 

[ararat]

holy crap that sounds awesome

let's see, maybe I'll even write a TR (my first one, in fact.)

 

[yourownworld]

CaduceusMercurius , I like the sober & peacefull works , I talk about those of your last message on this topic

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