don't mock it. i originally wrote it when i was like 13. i recently found it floating on the net, and redid it. i don't really believe in it, but i still like it as my own creation.
what do you think?
Dark Sun
Light is only an illusion,
Nothing to brighten the scrolls.
An expanding, lonsome desert,
A desert of broken souls.
The shine is only ephemeral,
Changing from a hello to a goodbye,
Some things aren’t meant to exist,
Under this enigmatic, dark sky.
The first thing to be treasured,
The last thing to be learned,
As fire finally burns out,
The message is earned.
Fear entered life’s pupil,
He came to his wanted end.
A toxic waste in all humans’ blood,
Love, the wound that won’t mend.
As he expired,
The lesson was heard,
No more doubt,
The truth was unblurred.
Dawn preceeds dusk.
Ignorance is key.
Pain will always exist.
True love is yet to be.
what do you think?
Dark Sun
Light is only an illusion,
Nothing to brighten the scrolls.
An expanding, lonsome desert,
A desert of broken souls.
The shine is only ephemeral,
Changing from a hello to a goodbye,
Some things aren’t meant to exist,
Under this enigmatic, dark sky.
The first thing to be treasured,
The last thing to be learned,
As fire finally burns out,
The message is earned.
Fear entered life’s pupil,
He came to his wanted end.
A toxic waste in all humans’ blood,
Love, the wound that won’t mend.
As he expired,
The lesson was heard,
No more doubt,
The truth was unblurred.
Dawn preceeds dusk.
Ignorance is key.
Pain will always exist.
True love is yet to be.
