My poem

[Gratefully_dead]

Alright I don't usually write poetry (go easy on me lol) hell I dont usually write much at all but my girlfriend and I just broke up and I've been kinda messed up about it so I felt like writing a poem was the "write" thing to do lol sorry about that terrible pun! anyways here it is

Let Go

Sometimes when i think of you I wish i could cry
To make these feelings real by a physical act
I know it's over, there is no more
yet I feel I can't let go
there's too much left unsaid
too much left undone
These thoughts in my head a roiling volcano
I can't let go
I can't let go

Your smell
Your touch
Your taste
I cannot forget, can never forget
It's all that is real, all encompassing
My north star by which I guide my life
The only thing that's real in a sea of deceit
I can't let go
I can't let go

I hate this feeling
I hate this place
I hate you and your mocking smile
I hate this all and yet I wonder why
Why I keep coming back for more
I wonder why
Why I cannot call forth a single tear
I can't let go
I can't let go

I must let go
I can't let go

 

[Lion]

Real emotion can not be critisized.

 

[BrainEater]

That's the way!!! My respect!!!!!!!!!

 

[buffachino]

I think all of us (or at least most of us) have been through this.
Too bad u broke up dude, was she hot?

More on topic, great poem; raw emotion and essence; I can feel what you feel through these words, great stuff man.

Roll yourself a big tulip or pack a nice cone and just relax mate; you learn allot more out of these bad experiences than you do with the good ones (in regards to love and in retrospect to the flaws either of you were a cause of)
Grow and learn from this my friend.

Peace.