chillin rhymin, open mic

[sidefx]

Smoking is chocking if ya don't toke right N spit it tight like a Rizzla Rasta Rollin Zigzag,
catch ya foot on a snag and you'll lag behind the rest wont impress no-body tonight unless you fight or understand there's a plot
against your well-being have to use your all-seeing eye to pry open this hex it wont press but may stress
the Point needed if needed to undo the voodoo of your soul its a toll u must pay on the day so pray that HE takes
you by the hand, and Not him with the Brimstone and Toads

 

[BrainEater]

that was pretty awesome, thanks for that mate!

a dice rolls like rice
mice go wild on spice
a vice can vary in size
bees check the degrees

 

[sidefx]

thanx bro i like your form

 

[BrainEater]

yoyoyoyoyoyo

what is it my brain
i know you're not stan
think of it like a stain
you'll be holdin a hand
but not a gentle one like rain
but more a bad one like satan
yo check it, all i'm sayin
is just a small part of the plan

peace :weedman:

 

[BrainEater]

yo yo

i just wrote a rhyme
out of some words
may it not be sublime
or blow brains of retards
and not waste your time
in that vast house of cards
so it won't be a crime
for blind windows to behold
or kind vacuums to fold
the shine of the dime
is what murders the frontline
the lime of the rhyme
is what binds the meek vine
time was and will be w00t
its that enables rhymes to shine



i also like forms other than shortliners, but unfortunately right now its just flowing in short sequences. :mrgreen:

 

[Crimzen]

i actually used to be a figure in my local hip hop community
i <3 rhymes

I'm sittin back with a sack at home all alone
blazed out of my brain so i let my mind roam
chillin out on the couch kickin back with a zig zag
smash back cones until they ask 'where the spliffs at?'
let me get that, as i reach my hand into a zip bag
this is the shit that will make you wana hit that

lol stoner lines

 

[BrainEater]

yo nice one

my brain explosion walking the streets of my soul
a subtle erosion is air in the watery seas
regardless i just think, whatever, i'll see
are glasses of ink, sink, like a frost bowl
so just let me smoke the shit, and get it rightly
pumped up into the reservoir made for that owl


peace

 

[IJesusChrist]

i dont do hip hop flow, i do classical siting by the fire. (lol)

So the grace of dawn is struck,
Light be out and out of luck,
Steady pace of breath in air,
To the world, a blankened stare.

A wink and a yawn to grasp outside,
The life of the day will not hide,
Leap forward to take undone,
Everything to be taken and won.

Confidence to destroy the lacking,
Speaking, conversing, send hate packing.
A great day to those who see,
An infinite bliss all through me.

 

[BrainEater]

yo that was nice man. 8)

yeah i'm sittin there havin a bun
just chillin and having lots of fun
watching the air flowin i breathe
catching my thoughts while i weave
a web of butterfly wings that may
shatter yall and yer blings or sway
so watch out for your beers and ears
and smoke shit like queers or careers
cuz i might just smoke you up, like chong
suck you in and blow you out, thru my gravity bong
yeah i'm a bow in a row, not a cow, and gonna
be also an arrow, swift and low in the air like runner
or gunner i will slay to clay like roaches
travellin on roads and shit with coaches


lol my imagination went a bit wild with me... :lol: :lol:
peace :weedman:

 

[IJesusChrist]

this is actually kinda a cool topic. I hate rap, but some good flow is TIGHT SUN.

Sitting on my window sill,
Inhaling up, and dropping pills.
Ain't life a bitch to me.
Or maybe its just the way I see.

Everythings so negative,
I just go to god, Beg, "Forgive!"
But then a tingle stirs through me,
What if its just the way I see?

Could I be the one at fault?
Playing in my own locked vault?
That's stupid, I won't admit.
But wait, if the glove fits...

How can I make the world bad?
A simple way of looking can?
I think this is true,
What the fuck do I do?

I pray for happiness but it doesn't come.
I see the fear and decide to run,
STOP
I turn around and suck it in,
Experience and understandin
Let the life flow through me
Like a child hippocracy.

So I must be nice to you?
To change my life,
To change my view?
This seems so weird,
So new to me.
Maybe its the way it should be.

 

[Illegalsmile]

i be patrollin while some trollin on message boards,
bored on the forum comin with a stoned force.
Psychonaut.org rock like Brock from Pokemon
weak cats stop and i smoke-a-mon
like a bong. got everybody chokin on
the realness.even fake people can feel this

boom bap

 

[IJesusChrist]

haha nice! I forgot about this thread.

Maybe a lil kratom in me,
But if it so, let it be,
Typing in the world's face,
People trying to block my pace.

Suck a big one,
I say in jest,
Unfortunately it won't rest.
I just gotta live with that,
Talkin like I'm some kinda rat.

Been learnin shit on the go,
Mind's a river, let it flow.
Thinkin of the future and where to be,
Hopefully we'll all get to see.

I really can't get away from the poetic verse... my bad

 

[Crimzen]

Welcome in to a world of hallucination
from a dude who used to work at a petrol station
night shift, no sleep, smoky exhalations
breathe in, breathe out, no expectations
just relax and observe from pupil dilation
expansion, followed by a big deflation
egocentric fantasies are a twisted reality
elevating, levitating on this lifted insanity
...

The fact of the matter, is that, it dont matter, as a matter of fact

 

[IJesusChrist]

very nice! I like

A bleak day brings summer fun,
But only if you let it run,
The imagination is what I mean,
A bunch of chemicals,
In a team.

The season changing in stagnant air,
How is it that, in fact, I stare?
I feel the change,
From what is unsaid,
Like the notes played,
To the dead.

A wispy memory of love and bliss,
Can't be taken from nature, or missed,
The season's hold on what was once true,
Now uncover's something truly blue;
The change of love and life within,
To strike the face and mind's grin.
Accept the change, and be without,
A memories path,
Is change enroute.

 

[Crimzen]

thats bang on poetic
speaks to u

 

[IJesusChrist]

thanks I think>? Don't know what that comment meant lol, but the poem is about seasonal change, and the change accompanied in the psyche. Yesterday (it's basically dead winter) it was so fucking warm out, the smell of unleashed aromas of the dirt under the snow tricked my psyche into believing it was spring.

A cruel trick, a very, very mean trick.

 

[Crimzen]

yea thanks is appropriate, it was a compliment haha
i understood and 'felt' the meaning of your rhymes thats all man

snow, wow, its about 40 degrees celcius in my city right now and it never snows here
the grass is always greener i suppose, if it snowed too often here im sure i'd complain about the cold the same way i whinge about the heat

 

[Crimzen]

This perplexed vexation has got me fixated upon,
the convex and concave, complex foundation that im on,
theres no remedy for thoughts and memories forever gone
do we straighten out the lines cause the curves go on too long?
see i dont really seek the answers im just tracking down the question
i wonder if the things ive learnt really postulate as lessons

 

[epitome]

Im All About My Mindstates, Rockin High Breaks,
Faust Time Space Literal, Some Say Its "Cynical"-
-To Think The Thoughts That Take My Sleep
So I Weed Eat, Smile Large And Try To Peek
At The Future Light, But This World Is Spiked, With Might
Im Talking Like A 40 in A Sippy Cup,
It Dont Sound Right
But What A Sight

Oh What A Night,
Y'all Dont Even Know
Im Here Flippin Flats, While Your Still Skippin Stones And
Still Skippin Stoned
I Keep Skippin Tones,
Like I Gotta Go, But I Dont

The Past

Goes By Like That,
This Kick Is A Clap,
I Made This High Hat, Offa Some Record Scratch,
Im Talkin Deep, Groove, Movin, Trip, Boomin,
With Some Kush By My Side, Imma Always Be Loomin
Pursuing, Our Lost Cause, Cause I Once Was
Best Believe, No I Wont Stop
Even If Time Does.

Real Talk Son..

-EPITOME-

 

[BrainEater]

yoyoyo

my encyclopedia is not about brains
tea hc all what it really contains
encycloweedia would be actually
a more appropriate name
so i still wonder what is me
ah yeah i remember the game
puffin the good shit is key
plus my favorite philosophy
not that i want to blame
but we want the cash now
you damned fucking clowns

what a rant lol mmmkay

peace